Cool Kid Writes

The sweet factory was filled with bad candy that you an i would no want to eat. it tastes like trolls , a book you don't want to hear it .So there were some elves that worked here and they were nice .They thought  the candy that they were making is yummy so they give people that !They won't let you past until you eat it . this stage is easy just add sauce and you won't taste anything . Now , I had to just do my plan . i had some sauce just in case and now I'll use it ! so i came in and asked "Hello may i try your sweets they look yummy." The elves were happy to serve so they quickly gave me a whole plate full of doughnuts. then i took out the sauce and said, " This here will make your food even better after I use it you can have it . I poured the sauce onto the treats and ate it ,"yum ! your food is tasty!" Then i finished with a loud burp and asked if i could pass the door. They brought me to the door and said "have fun at Mr books house....

Once upon a time , there lived a girl named Jessy . She lived in a poor  family deep in the woods. One day she was so bored she decided to wake up at 5:00. Sneaking out of  her small blanket she slowly tip-toed and grabbed a small bag to carry along with her. Her father had found a map lying on the floor a few years ago and kept it. Now Jessy wanted to look for this mysterious thing . It was called "Magic Mirror " she was so exited to find out what it meant. Even though she knew it was dangerous she still wanted to see  how it looked like.she ran off before her father found out what she was doing!  All the things that she could go through like the spinning room,tree falling,sweet disaster... and so on oh my she had to be brave to collect money.There was no time to lose ! before father comes i have to finish this ! I am brave !She grabbed the bag and started not long after she saw the mirror ... Oh she was  scared then she thought for a moment. "Should i g...